chapter two

I had a critique of chapter two tonight. There were six people at the Borders coffeeshop besides myself. Only three of the people had fully read my chapter, which was annoying. D1* seemed a little uncomfortable about the subject matter. Overall, people liked my writing, and seemed to have a common issue with the first three pages being too condensed.

M1* suggested that the first three pages could be a chapter that needs to be fleshed out and the remaining pages are a complete chapter on their own. That seemed to me the most interesting suggestion.